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flowsoffire ([personal profile] flowsoffire) wrote in [community profile] eleventyfest 2013-09-30 08:38 pm (UTC)

Eeeee, super big detailed review! =D Thank you so much for this, it's just precious! ♥
This moment with the Doctor and River, I just had to, his face! Ugh, it just means SO MUCH to them. Like you said, all of his suspicions fading away, finding out who she really are, born of his precious Ponds—suddenly understanding why she didn't come for them early and that she really didn't let him down at all, and the human plus thing too which has its symbolism—like that little signal waving at him meaning "hello, if you're not starting to see that woman is made for you now you are just a little bit hopeless". Because DNA doesn't make River or their relationship, it doesn't make her the equivalent of a Time Lady, but it does mean something—the child of the TARDIS =D His squeeing is just all the cute, and like you said, it's all the more striking after his wrath, so violent at first, then more controlled but still dark-looking, grabbing her wrist and demanding to know ♥ And then he just goes into giggly-puddle mode. Bless.
River reinvents herself and her universe.—this :D
All that's been stolen is one day returned.—v. happy you liked that line, it's a favourite of mine too =D
I get Mels moods like that—she's quite fascinating, especially whenever the Ponds are concerned. However, I usually don't really write young!River, I much prefer her when she's a bit wiser and knowledgeable and controls her feelings a lot—but here at the beginning of their relationship, it was very nice to explore…
Indeed, Rory and River are really different—and yet similar in their dedication to their loved ones, and it just gets more and more pronounced… But it's still so hard for him to figure out what to do with her. Brave Rory, still fighting for their relationship no matter what ♥
She's an arrow and he's a caretaker. He's used to softening bad news.
Love the description!
Rory holding his baby was absolute PERFECTION. We so agree on that ♥ Daddy!Rory. I love it so much. And I'm so happy you liked so many things about the Rory scene and picked up on so much! I just loved writing that scene and it's delightful to see it was so meaningful to you =D Father/daughter tender time. It just NEEDED TO HAPPEN.
Amy being still was quite fascinating to imagine, indeed! Here she was just left frozen and struck for a moment, and River was there at the right time… All three of them holding each other together. Just couldn't resist.
Eeeee. I can't with your comment and your happiness and enthusiasm =D It's just so blissful that you enjoyed it so much! *draws hearts*

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